Hi! This was cute - I think you did a good job of working in a number of cliches. My favorite one was when Oliver wore a revealing shirt so as to show off his Quidditch-toned abs, haha :) I noticed a few typos in there, so you may want to go back and edit later or have a beta look over it for you. I like parodies, and this one was a nice, fresh read :)

-Amanda

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This is a really entertaining one shot, I smiled the whole way through:D

I love how the ending isn't what you expect it to be, so many fanfics these days end with the main character getting his/her dream girl/boy literally begging at their feet for them! It was a nice change, and a lot funnier and more entertaining than the latter :)

Great job!

Author's Response: I glad you liked it:D
I know what you mean about them all ending the same, that's how I decided on my ending:P

thanks for the review! xx

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Aww, soo cute :). Aha I love how you put in the part where he was in Quidditch city and then in Fiona city! It was so funny! I thought the whole thing was actually really funny, how he said i could remember it like it was yesterday (because it was)!! I laughed really hard at that!! This was really cute and funny! Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Hehe, I honestly don't know where the Quidditch and Fiona city bit came from but atleast you liked it :)

thankyou so so so so much :D

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