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Reading Reviews for Paradise
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by PhoenixFlame8629 Dreams of Paradise

31st July 2012:
I thought that randomly inserting the lyrics made the story kind of disjointed and broken up.

Author's Response: Really? Thanks for the input, I'll make an effort to revise that! :)

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Review #2, by Hermione389 Dreams of Paradise

26th March 2012:
I love this songfic, it's awesome! The song (which is my total favourite by the way) really suits Sirius. So brilliant!

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D x

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Review #3, by RavenclawWayToBe Dreams of Paradise

2nd January 2012:
You're song fic was right on track of what i think a song fic should be. i think it was the perfect length and had great description. I love how you took a different perspective on Sirius and his childhood. Many people paint him as all cocky and arrogant and never hurt, but you showed that he turned all his fears into hope and determination and he persevered through all the dark times he lived in. I love that you showed a different side to Sirius, a side that dreamt of a better world and although times were hard, he always had dreams and never let go. your fic was AMAZING! (i am in love with Sirius Black, so i loved your story because i loved how your wrote Sirius!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad I got the correct idea of what a song fic should be! And a different view of cocky young Sirius was exactly what I was going for! Thank you again :)

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