I love your story! I have been flat out reading it since 6 pm and now it's 1 am here in NZ...haha I should sleep. Great theme and plot going on just two teeny things that are a little annoying to read:

First it would be Miss Redwood not mrs because she isn't married.

Second the term is Legilimens. As in Nikki is a Legilimens.

That's all! I'm gonna keep going even though my teachers/parents/friends/boyfriend will kill me for being a moody cow tomorrow.
xx keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you for the corrections! I will be sure to fix those... just shows you how much my writing could be improved.

As for the plot thing, i had this idea for a long time and wrote these beginning chapters early on but looking back, i see not much of a use for them except to give some idea of what my characters are like..not much of an explanation but I understand what you mean. (But remember, they are teens XD)

Thanks for reading!!! :)

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Definite love :) time to read on...

Author's Response: Thank you!

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i quite like this story but i dont think her dating Adrian will last. please keep writing!

Author's Response: Hahaha nice observation :) College classes just started up again so it will be a while before the next one is posted but I am writing!!

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This was my favorite chapter of your story so far! I love the voices Nikki hears and I think it really adds something to your story. Is it possible that Russ has a crush on Nikki or he is just really protective of her? Also, I would love to see more of Regulus in your upcoming chapters. Anyways, great story and I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! No Russ doesn't have a crush on Nikki. He is really just like a brother to her so he is always looking out for her. She tends to get in a lot of trouble. Anyways, Reg will be seen more, just maybe not his year. I have big plans for him. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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This story just keeps on getting better. Update soon 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you, I will post on tonight but it has to go through validation first so it may be a few days

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I like lily/sev, they deserve a chance 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Haha, well i dont want to spoil anything but lets say i like them both enough too :)

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My fav character is nikki my least is marlene 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Oh good, my characterization is working! Funny enough, those are based of real people too!

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This story is interesting. I love it 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thats my goal. I'm glad you like it so much.

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Oh reg. He is one of my favourite characters 9/10 : )

Author's Response: I know! Isn't Reg the best. He has always been a favorite of mine, even though he isnt there most of the series

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I really liked it. I like your writing style 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you. Oh and yes i know you commented on every chapter, i just feel entitled to comment back :)

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I really liked it. It was a great start 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much :D i'm glad i got some more reviews because they really are encouraging

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i love your writing style and hope to see more of this story in the futer :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)! i have been writing more but it wont be up until after the holidays since validation will be closed. I hope you read it in the next few weeks :)

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