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Review #1, by BlameItOnTheNargles  Outside Looking In

18th December 2011:
I love the song this chapter is named after btw ;D
Anyway I love your story so far. It has a great start to it and really interesting to have just a normal average girl who isn't mega beautiful. I love the way she doesn't care but anyway can't wait to read more so update soon! :D


Author's Response: thank you so much for the bossome (a mixture of boss and awesome in case you werent aware) review! It seriously made my day! Well techincally my night but, you get the point. I really wanted to show that no, not everybody in the whole entire world is a super model, and no, the whole world is not full of Taylor Swift's and Megan Fox's but there is still love in the world. Thank you so much for the review again, and i have the next 3 chapters already written and getting ready for validation!!! :)


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Review #2, by BlackIsAwesome Who Knows

13th December 2011:
Oooh, sounds awesome so far :)
I really think you should alternate between the both of them, and not just one. (For POVs, I mean) It would make it more interesting that way :)

Good start :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review :) i just started this story and it is a bit slow, so im hoping for you to learn alot about the characters in the next chapter. I think i am going to continue to alternate POVs because i like writing from both, because then you can understand how each of them feels, and reasons for their decisions, because then you dont get confused or angry at the author for any of the characters actions :) thank you so much for reviewing ! the next chapter will be up ASAP :)

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