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Review #1, by CherryBoom Sparks Fly

6th October 2012:
Okay, I wasn't expecting quite so spicy story, when I decided to read this one-shot. It was lovely, but as love scenes go, bit generic.

I have always thought that it's really hard to write that kind of love scene effectively before you get readers otherwise emotionally invested in plot and characters. Since this is a one-shot, that kind of interest in characters is really hard to cultivate with less than 2000 words.

I guess what I'm trying to say here is that I would have been very happy with this one-shot, if the bedroom door stayed closed. You know what I mean? =)

The story was well written, flow was nice and I didn't catch any typos. I liked that you made them very loving, without going overboard with it. You described the surroundings very sparingly, I kind of wished bit more description to those.

Author's Response: Um thanks. Yeah this was written along time ago but I understand where you're coming from. Ugh, I know setting is one of my weak spots. I'm trying to work on it.

Thanks for the review anyways. :)


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Review #2, by True Author Sparks Fly

21st May 2012:
Very Goood story! I love the song and i'll remember this story whenever i'll listen it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Haha, I always think of Harry and Ginny when I hear it as well! :)

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Review #3, by charlottetrips Sparks Fly

2nd May 2012:
I thought that it was all done very tastefully. There was passion and lust but a lot of love between them. The scene starts out a little crazy and wild with someone, maybe Harry, maybe not, coming through the rain and then it is Harry and then it gets crazy hot!

I like how you characterized Ginny as not a must type girl but with Harry's sweetness she turns into a girl like that this one time. I like that they're characterized as not being mushy all the time but that we as readers are privileged with a glimpse of this soft moment between them.

The love scene was, again, tastefully done. I'm not into terribly graphic scenes but when it's written emotionally, that is much better to read about then anything else.

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I'm really glad you liked the characterisation, especially of Ginny. I must admit, characterisation is one of the things I worry most about especially on the main characters. I know that personally, if I think the characters are really OOC it's more of a struggle to read the story and enjoy it. It means a lot to me to hear that it works.

Phew, that's a relief. I did try to do it tastefully and it was my first time writing such a scene. Hopefully it added to the story instead of taking away from it.

Thanks so much again for the lovely review. :D


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Review #4, by by the sea i live not. Sparks Fly

7th April 2012:
I have only one word for this: Beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! :)

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Review #5, by jellybean2109 Sparks Fly

21st January 2012:
that was the most amazing song fic ive ever read this was bloody excelent

Author's Response: Thank you so much ! :D
I'm so happy you enjoyed it ! :)


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Review #6, by CantGetEnoughHarryGinnyLove Sparks Fly

16th January 2012:
I found myself smiling as I read this, one of the racier/sexual five I've rear on this site which doesn't seem to have as much smut as I'm looking for but hey good nontheless , I will have to find this song as I've never heard it!

Author's Response: Um thanks I think ! XD
I'm really glad you liked the story and definitely look up the song, its pretty good. :D


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Review #7, by Lexi Black Sparks Fly

14th December 2011:
I'll probably turn into your most loyal reviewer! lol I like it. I knew you had a twisted mind but I didn't know you could write like that . lol XD You should get a banner though, with him smiling. I love it but I wish it was longer.

Author's Response: I'm going to try and get a banner soon. I've already put the request up on TDA. But its soo hard to get pictures of Dan ! ! XD Hey I'm not that twisted ! Believe me I could have made it WAY worse ! ! XD You're obviously not so innocent yourself if you got it. . :P And I tried to do it tastefully. At least its not (I hope) one of those really awkward things to read. XD Anyway its the lyrics that are dodgy not me ! ! XD Hehe~ I'm glad you liked it ! ! XD

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