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Review #1, by RandomRyter Keep Your Friends Close and the Snobs Closer

8th December 2011:
Another interesting chapter! The only thing...when you said "First Person" I think you meant "Third" because, first is like..."i walked to the store" while third is "he walked to the store".

I'll be watching for an update!

Author's Response: Oh, oops! Thanks for the catch! I'll correct it :) Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by RandomRyter Beautiful

8th December 2011:
This is interesting! I am curious as to how the girls will all connect. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

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