Wow. That was dark! Like really dark and horror-y; it was so awesome! Definitely one of my favorites. Really well done and a really good insight on how he becomes who he is. Loved the Seer as well, you got her perfectly, especially with the prophecy.
SamMalfoy93Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was awesome! I never even planned on putting in the seer (or use that particular werewolf) until I started writing too! Thanks again! Report Review
Umm... I'm taking a wild guess here... the Seer is Trelawney, that I know, and the son is either Greyback or Remus ... not sure.Author's Response: I would have preferred you didn't give it away here, but you're correct. It's Greyback. Report Review
*Jaw drop* Woah... I like dark and angst... And I expected one of the two, but this was horror... Woah...
Ok, I think I know who the people are... And if you wrote 2 of my favorite characters... :D
It was great! And I'm glad you couldn't put the rhyming part alone (As mean as that sounds xD) cause... This was awesome.
Ok well now that I've said that I'm going to wish you luck in my own challenge xD
By the way, Happy Holidays from Slytherin house!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! She's your favorite character? I had no idea! Yeah, I'm glad I couldn't get the rhyming part alone too! I didn't intend to put the seer or the prophecy in at all! Report Review
It's me from the forums with your review. So I could definetely guess who the Seer and the son were, but I won't write it here!
I enjoyed the your depiction of the seer, you really captured her quirks and how eccentric and kind of clueless she really is. The prophecy with the werewolf was relaly well done. You showed how she's generally crazy and how when she makes an actual prophecy she has no idea what's going on, which is exactly how it was in the books.
The part about the boy was interesting as well. We don't really know a whole lot about him and how he became the evil, bitter person he is in the books, and the way it happened here was totally plausible.
This was definetely a lot darker than your other story, but you pulled it off well.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you could tell who they are and that you think I wrote her well! Report Review
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