So you said in one of your other chapters that you've written so much more! Please please update more!! This is such an awesome story and I LOOOVEE seeing new ones :D

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please update soon i really would enjoy reading some new work and see the progression of the story

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, I didn't get any for chapter 10 I thought people had lost interest!
-Sarita x


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I suppose Rose is a little mad at Scorpius? I don't think the girls like his new girl toy very much. They seem to want to use her for a chew toy.

Nice to see you again :)

Author's Response: Haha you could say that :P

Thanks for reviewing, nice to hear from you!

-Sarita x

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That's such a cool and different pregnancy test!I mean,they're magic,it should be some crazy,outstanding method.Amyway,I really like this story.Gonna keep reading, and hopefully all these should be couples will get their acts together.:)

Author's Response: Thanks I did have to think for a while because some people are so lazy when it comes to these kind of stories in the imagination department. Thanks so much, hope to hear your future comments!
- Sarita x

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Lucky Freddie :) He gets to live through Roses immature stage.
enjoyed the chapter, see you next time!

Author's Response: So true! Thank you very much for reviewing, hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
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This chapter was great I loved how Sarah was the one to get James to relax and listen to what happened. And how James was really there for rose. I hope she says no to freddie and gets together with scorp! I need another chapter when is it coming? Such a good story, amazing writing! -Taylor

Author's Response: Thank you so much the interconnections between individual characters are very important to me :D another chapter is coming soon, fear not :)
Thanks!
- Sarita x

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WoW, James is a special cousin. I think he'll be in Roses corner through the worst of it :) Very good chapter, full of emotion.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really wanted the readers to connect to James as a character because he is a huge part of the story. Thanks for reviewing, please keep it up :)
- Sarita x

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This chapter was fantastic! I love Rose and James in particular during this chapter. Their dynamics are awesome! I really want to know what happens next! I need another chapter!!! And she has to tell Scorpius! Oh gosh. Have you written the next chapter yet? I'm just so excited for it! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: I have, in fact, written about 21 chapters in total :P They are being tweaked constantly but the bare bones of the storyline are in place :) thanks, i really wanted to build on the relationship between James and Rose and their brother-sister relationship as opposed to a cousin/friend relationship. James is pretty much one of my favourite characters :D Thanks for reviewing, keep it up :)
-Sarita x

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Oh that was fabulous! I love Rose's character, and how you've been developing it throughout the story! And the interacting between everyone in their group, too. But the end was definitely my favorite part! I can't wait for the next chapter! When is it coming? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much I love reading your thoughts!
Next chapter is validating :)
-Sarita x

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I've been reading this since it first went up and I've enjoyed every chapter but this is my first review.
I just loved your very unique take on how a magical pregnancy test would work, I've never seen one like that before!
Also, I've been wondering who the Scorpius in your banner is?
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love to read reviews and I'm so glad you decided to review! Thanks, I wanted to be as original as possible I'm glad you liked! His name is Boyd Holbrook :) Please keep reviewing I'd love to hear your opinions :D
-Sarita x


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Write more, write more!

Author's Response: Mwahah I will :) Keep reviewing! Thank you!
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Oooo good chapter! I love all of these love triangles! Dom and Sean crack me up! And I just want Sarah and James and Scorpius and Rose to get together! They'd be such cute couples! Will there be another chapter soon? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much :D There will of course be another chapter soon! :)
-Sarita x

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One word: more! 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Keep it up :D
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Aw I loved this chapter! But when is she going to figure out that she's pregnant! And poor Scorpius, I feel bad because he seems so nice and cute. And I wish James and Sarah would get together! I love James's character, and the chemistry between all of the friends is awesome, especially for the girls! Will there be more soon? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: She figures out she is pregnant in the next two chapters :) Aww thank you so much, I worked really hard on geting the chemistry realistic to teenagers :D There is more coming shortly, yes!
Thanks for reviewing :D
-Sarita x

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Oh god, more love triangles! You have a talent for causing mayhem, and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely NOT a Chelsea fan, and my heart went out to poor Scorpius. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Wooohoo, thank you so much! Trust me, Chelsea gets much worse, and she's got an equally evil ally as well so I can't wait to hear what you think of my coming chapters! :D
-Sarita x

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Loved it! Get the next chapter up quick pleeeasee

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) Please continue to leave your feedback!
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More! Loved it! Fav story ever! ~savvy

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing :D
-Sarita x


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This chapter had lots of interesting twists! I like how they're all anumagi. That was really fun, and great to read. I love how you called Scorpius wolf boy! Haha. And the end was a nice cliffhanger! Is there another chapter coming soon? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: There is most certainly a new chapter coming soon Cassie! Thank you very much for your continued input, I did a little dance when I saw I had another review! :)
-Sarita x

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this is really good, i like the way you have wrote them in their animal form and how they are all anamagi,i cant wait for the update
-potterfan310

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I was really worried about the animagi idea, but it seems to be a bit of a hit :)
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I love how they are anamagi (that how you spell it?) Anyways good story, has a lot of potential, and I will be keeping up!!! ~Savvy

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much :) Reviews like this genuinely make me want to continue writing! :D
- Sarita x

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O.O well... i skimmed it. so sorry, but i chose short story because i'm sick, and dont feel like reading. its a great story though.

Author's Response: Aw thats a shame, sorry to hear you're sick... hope you get well soon and I hope you review again if you do continue reading!
- Sarita x

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Nice second chapter! I really like the girls interactions. It's really real, which I liked. They're best friends so they're going to gossip, you know? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much, I wanted this story to be real and I wanted to capture as much of the gritty teenage life as I could, so I hope I succeed in further chapters! Thanks for reviewing!
- Sarita x

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That was a really good first chapter! It flowed really nicely. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you like the others! :D
- Sarita x

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great chapter and story i can't wait for you to write more :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Keep reading and reviewing! :D
- Sarita x

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awesome prologue!! :) loved it :) and the first chapter seems to get great as well! can't wait for it!!
good story! :) already like it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy my coming chapters :D I look forward to hearing your thoughts on them :)
- Sarita x

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