this is amazing, it is my favourite fanfiction so far, i love how its so happy and i will definitely be reading more! Report Review
It is so amazing.
I will stab you with a biscuit if you don't continue.
Love your Best Friend Britt
xxAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks Britt, heaps glad you like it ;).
even though its terrible.
your bestfriend Bree ;)
xx Report Review
I like the detail in this chapter. You did it well here.
Question - Where did Voldemort come from? Isn't the lake on the school grounds? You might want to put them outside the grounds so that makes it more realistic.
The fight was nicely done. I like how Draco protected Hermione; even against his own father. Though Lucius might have done a little more in the fight. It doesn't matter whose side he's on, just a little more participation.
Overall, good job. I am putting this in my favorites so I can keep an eye on your mork.Author's Response: Thank youu :).
not sure if you got my repsonse from before? I thought I sent this one too? anyway :)
- a 'special insider/s' let voldemort, the deatheaters and the dementors into hogwarts, it will all be revealed shortly :)
Lucius will be in it alot more, promise!
thank you heaps, :) Report Review
I think that the development of Draco and Hermione's relationship was a little too fast. There should be more detail to it. But that is just a thought. A reaction by Harry might also be good here. L like how Ginny reacted to it. I also like the description of the Head's room. Questions - Is there two bathrooms or just one? Did Neville ever show up? You don't say.
Overall, nice job.Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
I know it was quick for me too, I kind of wanted to get straight into it, I apologise if it's too forward. :)
Harry + Ron don't quite understand what's going on just yet, big reactions from both of those are coming very soon! :)
There is the one bathroom that Draco and Hermione share :).
Neville will show up very soon, I have a great idea on what to do with why I haven't mentioned him :)
thank you! Report Review
BLOODY HELL! What happend to hermione, what will draco tell her? This is soo exciting I can't sit still.
More, I need more. Can't wait till the next chapter
9/10Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
All will be revealed in near-coming chapters, all questions will be answered very soon!
Thank you :) Report Review
Awesome story, very well written :)Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I love writing cliffhangers! :) Report Review
This story is coming along very nicely and is well written. The only thing I have to say is, concidering the first chapter is so happy maybe it should be titled "Forgiviness and Magic" or something happy like that because there isn't really too much sorrow in it with all the giggles and magic going on, you know? Great story!
Grace 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for you review, :)
I shall change that title right now, I definetely agree, thank you heaps :)! Report Review
Please update soon! :) I really love this story Author's Response: Thank you!
I have just updated and waiting for validation, so sorry I haven't updated in so long, I've been quite busy for the past few months, not to worry, I'm back and ready to type! :) Report Review
amazing start, cant wait to read the rest of it xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you :)
Glad you like it! xxx Report Review
You HAVE to write a 3rd chapter!Author's Response: I have just completed my third chapter and waiting for validation, hope you like it! :) Report Review
You need to write more!Author's Response: I know, I'm getting there ! :)
Hope you liked the first few chapters. Report Review
i bloody love it!!! :)))Author's Response: Thank you so much, really glad you like it. :)! Report Review
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