I have spent literally all day reading this and I think it's great! I love the plot, it's so different from so many stories with this sort of storyline. I can't wait for more :)Author's Response: This review made my day!
I am going to dive back into fanfiction soon, after I get Finals over with and I will be officially done with my first year of college!
I am doing major editing to this here and there, and the plot is the same but it now flows better and doesn't move as badly.
So, thanks! I hope you keep with it!
Teresa Report Review
OMG I think this is such an amazing story. I was really enjoying it. I cant wait until the next chapter, and can find out what happens next. :DAuthor's Response: This review made my day! (:
The next chapter is validated and I have chapter 8 in the editing and I'm well on my way for chapter 9.
Glad you liked it! Check out my other stories! Report Review
AH! I love it but hate it! Does Sirius like Lily?!?! and the whole she was only trying to shock you thing isnt going to go down well i dont think. It was so good and you really did well yo capture the whole confusing time thing! I cant wait for a new chapter! its a stressing read but good stressing exciting stressing if you get me?! Im still freaking out nervous and im going to be wondering what happens next for god knows how long! Please please update soon cos i dont want to be obssesing over allthe different scenarios for to long! :) xoxoxAuthor's Response: Awe, thank you so much! This review made my day!
And I can honestly say no, Sirius does not like LILY. (cough).
And I love arguing and I figure you can't have a Lily/James story without at least one heated argument every so chapter.
I love that it's effecting you, because believe me it's stressing me too! I've got three different versions of chapter five and I'm going insane over how to write them.
I at least know how I am doing chapter six (I've practically written it in my head), but chapter five keeps getting rewritten.
And don't worry about Emmery shocking James, thing's will be fine...at least I think.
Now I have to go back and look at what I have for chapter five.
Thanks for the review! Report Review
AH i read and reread ALL of the bits where the marauders come up! I only read James/Lily fanfics and i LOVE James! More than any other character besides maybe Neville or Lily?Author's Response: I know! Me too! He's my favorite to hypothesize about, maybe besides Remus. Report Review
AHH! When I read the first part, I thought maybe you accidentally uploaded a chapter from a different story and had to reread the last chapter to make sure it was right!
I really like this story and I like how original it is. I feel like you character was good off, telling James that it is more like she lost her memory. Almost like a bad potion where she loses her memories, but gain some other people's. That's how she knows about the map and stuff.
At the last scene, where there was the fight, I kept thinking about a scene from Pirates of the Carri bean where Elizabeth Swan is trying to get the boys attention, so she fakes pass out. I kept imagining Lily doing that to break the tension.
Well, I really loved it! Update really soon!!!
TheKikGeekAuthor's Response: Lol, I really have no idea what possessed me to do that, the dream. I know how I want the story to go and before I could help myself I kept typing away and was like OH! How did I do that?
And I like making characters that seem real to me.
I'm glad you loved it!
Lol I love that idea! Haven't seen those movies in forever!
Chapter Five I've written 3 times now and each version has a different ending and each one is a different way I want the story to play out so I'm writing and then seeing which one is best.
THANKS! Report Review
Oh! I love it! I'm interested in what Lily Evans was doing before she went all crazy and stuff. Also, I want to know how Dumbledore will explain how a real person ends up in a fictional world! Update soon!!Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I plan on doing a bit of explanations next chapter, but still leave a bit of mystery to it!
Right now I'm kind of loaded with school work, but I'm going to try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can. Report Review
Personaly i thought this was a great set up chapter. Please keep them coming.Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I plan on entering chapter two in the queue as soon as it opens again in January! Thanks for the read and review! Report Review
Awwh this is sweet I adore it at least, please do keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks! I am currently working on chapter two and juggling all the other stories I'm writing. Thanks for the revieew! Report Review
WHOA! The whole mauraders are my favourite generation and you can fantasise about what happens and i loved and hated book five and seven because of snapes memories and my favourite characters died, is exactly how i feel! This story is so interesting so far and your good at writing i hate those shitty ones that dont make much sense. Also if you have read any good Lily/ James can you please put some in if you choose to reply?! Sorry for the big review its just i love this story so far. Update soon please :) xoxoxAuthor's Response: Awe, you're review made my day. And don't worry, I love long reviews!
I think a lot of the people love the Marauders become it's all left up to us to imagine so it's neither necessarily right or wrong.
And I have read a few good Lily/James:
Living Life- by singing. It's mature.
Time After Time- by Harry Potter FrEaK04
Living With the Potters- by evalyn is a cute one.
Once Defied- by pennyardelle.
And if you're really desperate for a read I currently have 22 pages of Favorite Stories you can sift through, a few are ancient and abandoned and horrendous but there are really some amazing ones in there and I'm pretty sure you can find something to tickle your fancy.
And I have chapter two in the works, but I'm juggling many stories trying to do one at a time. I hope the queue closure will allow me to write more and hopefully be a chapter or two above an update because I have a habit of writing then updating and then making people wait while I write it.
So, that being said, I'm glad you loved it and I look forward to future reviews and loved your thoughts! Report Review
Honestly, I was expecting a really lame story but that was really good!!!Author's Response: I appreciate your honesty! Its refreshing!
And I'm glad you like it. I plan on having chapter two up ASAP after the queue is back up, because I'm alternating updating between all my stories at the moment.
Thanks for your thoughts! Report Review
Really interesting! I was a band geek in high school as well. Can't wait to read the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you! :D I thought I'd try a bit different character. And I hope to get Chapter Two up before Queue closure but I don't think I will. Report Review
I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D Emmery seems like an awesome and real character to write and read about. Lol, it's cool how she's a band nerd. I'm a low brass player too~ trombone player in concert band and doing colorguard for marching band.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
And Emmery, to me, is a very real person. She's part of me, my friends, and who I would like to be. I feel it's easiest to write a character (at least one) based off someone you know very well. And I love that you enjoyed the band nerd (: I play on (possibly) including this once she continues her adventure at- gasp- Hogwarts. Report Review
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