Ahaha, this was really great. You have a talent for writing humor. I loved Molly's personality in this, since it wasn't what you usually expect for her, and I like that Lucy was the "perfect" girl. It was a new dynamic to a NextGen story.
I feel like the plot moved along just a tad too fast for me, but that's really my only complaint. Your grammar was good, and I loved the idea! Good job! ^_^
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ME LIKEY INSANE.
AND YES, I'M STILL ON THE WHOLE CAPS-LOCK-THING. IT'S EASIER, AND FUN. PLEASE DO NOT CONSIDER IT YELLING.
I LIKE YOUR STORIES. THIS ONE'S A LITTLE SIMILAR TO LYSNADER, IN THE LANGUAGE SHE USES AND THE THINGS SHE'S ATTRACTED TO[COOKIES>:)], BUT THE PEOPLE ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT. FOR A START, SORRY TO BE PRINCESS OBVIOUS, BUT THERE'S NO MEH. THAT'S THE BIG DIFFERENCE IN MY HEAD. AND SHE'S NOT EVIL.
I THINK YOUR WRITING STYLE IS VERY RECOGNISABLE :) ME LIKEY. PLEASE IGNORE ALL WRITTEN ABOVE. I CANNOT BE BOTHERED TO BACKSPACE AND REWRITE.
I LIKE HER INNER THOUGHTS :) THEY MAKE ME LAUGH, A LOT.
XAuthor's Response: Haha I'm glad you liked it Emem :D
And I'm not surprised you typed it in caps lock, as I was talking to you when you wrote it :P
I don't know how to respond to what you wrote. It's obvious you're still hyper.
I'm glad you liked it though, and thankk you for reviewing! â¥
Heya! I'm making the effort to review stuff from everyone in my favourites/I know on the forums :) x.
This is such a funny, random story. Yes it is random and I cannot see a plotline and poorp Percy is always portrayed as bad in next-gen but SO WHAT? I love it! It made me laugh, which is what I needed.
So yeah...can't think of much to say because I'm really rather crap at reviews! See you around!
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Hello! This is REALLY late, sorry. My holiday season has been INSANE. First of all, thanks for entering my challenge!
Anyways, this story is cute! I think Molly is fun and bubbly, and her thoughts are hilarious to follow. Also, good characterization on Lucy and the other Weasley family members.
I think this was a good introduction and first chapter, keep it up! Results should be posted soon in the challenge section. :)
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Ha nice one Amington, I like the way she reminds me very much of someone. can't think who *cough But i really liked it epic ending! X K
10/10Author's Response: Aww thanks K :D I didn't think it was very good but I'm glad you liked it :D xx Report Review
Hello from your Secret Santa in the Corvarium! :) I'm here to leave some reviews - so keep an eye out! ;) (Also, sorry this is a day late - the next ones should be on time, I just got confused!)
I thought this was really funny! Your Molly is a quirky kind of girl who made me laugh. "You know, the ones that saved all of you and your family's lives. Or the ones that killed them. Either way, my family made a difference." Heh. Regardless, the Weasleys had a large impact!
I enjoy reading Molly's inner monologue - her thoughts are humorous to follow. I liked your introduction to the Weasley family - that bit about Audrey having a bell was brilliant. Lucy made for a great little sister as well - I liked the contrast between her and Molly. I did think that Percy was a bit over the top, but then I guess Percy always was a bit like that, eh? :) I think you've got an excellent start here, but make sure you're able to keep up characterization - all of them have really awesome potential!
This flowed really nicely and was quite enjoyable. I'm interested in seeing where the plot goes from here! I saw no glaring grammar mistakes, which was a plus. Also, forgot to mention this earlier - loved the quote from Doctor Who! It was actually so seamlessly blended in that I didn't notice at first.
Excellent job! I'll be back with more reviews shortly! ;)
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