Please, please, please update soon! This is a wonderful story, and they're both staying very true to their characters.
~RebeccaAuthor's Response: Thanks, I really do appreciate the encouragement, because this story is giving me the hardest time of any of them, but maybe I will get my muse for it back soon. Thank you so much for reviewing!! Report Review
Another awesome chapter! I'm loving how the characters are turning out. A lot of their personalities are more emphasized in this chapter. I think that your really doing a good job with the character elements. As for the story/plot development, I think it coming out quite nicely, just a few revisions here and there and it would be perfect.
I really admire how persistent and patient James is towards stubborn ol' Lily. I think that makes him a really worthy male character as he's really not afraid to display his affections to her, despite her "rejections".
Keep on going :) I'm really loving this story!
Holiday Review Extravaganza Event TwoAuthor's Response: Thanks again! I am so glad you like it so far :) I haven't really had much time lately but hopefully after the Christmas rush I can get back on track. Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
I find this chapter really cute :) It's so adorable how a part of Lily believes that James could really be in love with her, while her other half remains pretty stubborn and skeptical. I can't wait to see her give into her feelings >_< or at least, I hope she does.
I think the chapter could have gone a lot smoother with a few added transition sentences. Other than that, grammar seems pretty good as well as spelling. Good job! I love your creativity!
Holiday Review Extravaganza Event TwoAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! The reason for any roughness in the story would be because it was done last year when I was just starting on HPFF so I probably need to go in and do some rewriting, but thank you! I really appreciate your review! Report Review
Another great chapter awww james is so sweat towards lily. I melted when he told her all he wanted for christmas was her. Then Sirius had to go and ruin it all way to have bad timing Sirius. But at least they shared a beautiful moment and was happy that it had stayed between them both.Author's Response: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!! All of your reviews have really brightened my day! I am so glad you liked the story :) and thank you for reviewing!!! Report Review
Oh lily is living in denial but its normal for her since she is lily and she is so used to not liking james but after she believed that he really does love her, her opinon on him started to change :). Very nicely done great story to read :)Author's Response: Thank you!! So glad you liked it! This story was one I was more nervous about and have been conflicted on how to follow the plot after the second chapter, but I am glad you liked it! Report Review
Update soon! This is really good, I would like to know what happens.Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully I will get another chapter done soon... Report Review
Really liking this story! Please continue to write more :)Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't abandoned it, just so you know I just have a few other challenges to do, and a couple of other things, but it will be updated after that :)
Thanks for your review!! Report Review
Please update soon. I like your story. Thanks!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: Thank you! I intend to update it sometime soon, but I am currently splitting time between this and two other projects, so.hopefully soon.
Thanks for your review, and I'm glad you enjoy it! Report Review
I cant wait for the other chapters to come out! I really liked the 2 chapters that are already out! keep up the good work!Author's Response: Aw thank you! So glad you enjoyed them, and I hope the rest will be as well received whenever I get them posted (after the queue reopens, I suppose). Happy holidays and thank you for your review! Report Review
Excellent story, I can't wait until you post the next chapter! xAuthor's Response: Oh thank you! I have just submitted the second chapter for validation, so if it doesn't fall into the queue closure, it should be up soon. I hope you enjoy!
Thanks so much for your review, and happy holidays! Report Review
i like it its differentAuthor's Response: Why thank you, the secnd chapter has just been submitted and I hope it can be validated before the queue closure. Hope you enjoy it, and Happy Holidays! Report Review
good chapter :) I already really like it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what's going to happen :)
great work! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter right now, actually, so your review is very encouraging and inspiring! I hope you enjoy the entire story :) Report Review
This story is AMAZING! Is there going to be a next chapter?Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, this is going to be multi-chptered, but it definitely won't be finished by Christmas. Silly me started it too late for that... Report Review
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