Cute! I thought it was adorable. Poor Remus, she must have hit him real good... Report Review
Aww. That was so sweet and touching. I loved Alexis and Remus, and how Lily was a good enough friend to not let Alexis know that Remus was going to ask her out, and, of course, I loved the list. Report Review
I never thought of Remus that way, but you made it plausible. It just never came into a fic so far as I know. It sounded like Remus though, so you did it well.
I like how it ended, with Remus asking the girl out. Nice and sweet.
Overall, good job. Report Review
awe!! i loved this! i love how it started and ended with lists, that was a cool idea! i also love how you used canon characters, like kingsley and arthur!
anyway, i liked your main character and i liked that she wasn't a gryffindor, because its rare to read about non-gryffindor girls in marauder era!
well, like i said, i just thought this was adorable and i loved the happy ending :) Report Review
Oh, that was so cute! I was sort of skeptical when I read the summary (let's face it, I can't really see Remus being rude/crude) but that was adorable and very believable!
Everyone seemed very in character, but I especially love how you wrote Lily. The line when James asks Alexis if she's been learning from Lily was hilarious!
I really enjoyed this--great job! Thanks for posting it! Report Review
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