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Review #1, by H Edgy

11th June 2012:
Not bad, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. I understand that Astoria is quite an arrogant character, and that it is told from her point of view- but she doesn't appear to have any faults besides her Slytherin indoctrination which doesn't make her that believable. I love the idea and the writing though- please update soon! :)

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Review #2, by Michelle Edgy

31st May 2012:
more. More. MORE!!! update soon!!

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Review #3, by LilyShadowHaze Edgy

11th April 2012:
I love it when she says 'I wonder if it would actually work'. This story is great! She's a pretty cool character and your writing has this BOOM effect. Sharp and clever.

Write more soon!

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Review #4, by simply_SIRIUS<3 Bored

26th February 2012:
Oooh, I like this! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Next chapter is out! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Review #5, by Miss Nothing Bored

3rd February 2012:
I absolutely loved this. It is extremely well written, possibly one of my favourite stories on here. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means a lot. Next chapter is on its way ;)

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Review #6, by rachelboo Bored

6th January 2012:
Hm. So I look for a new chapter of your rose/Scorpius story and find this? Have to say I'm pleasently surprised. Astoria is as cold as Rose, but in a complety different way and I love how we got to see a softer side of her when Haden moved away. The whole sleep thing gives it kind of a diffrent edge and I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going to go with that. You're writing is superb and a little different from your other story, which makes it all the more interesting to read. Not sure I'm really connecting with Theo...and very interested about the Igor guy...but Draco! I must have him.

Lots of sparkly love, Racheboo

Author's Response: Thanks for being the first to review! Was getting a little worried. I don't want people not to connect with Astoria, which I was weary about writing a female character with little insecurities. She will develop a lot more through the next chapters. Theo seems a little soppy but he's ever so loyal. Igor.aw. Just you wait. Thanks for the review.

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