This is so sad, i find it so heartbreaking that is siblings just abandoned him when he needed them, how lily just turned and left.
It's beautifully written, you are very talented. Report Review
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the darkness of it, and I often imagined the same thing happening to Albus as well. (I am nearly positive this is Albus)
This is probably really thick of me, but what does the last bit mean? The sedative bit?
I thought it was powerful, dark, and really enchanting. Splendid job . . . and I think you should write a companion piece. (But I know I hate it when people say that) Thank you so much for writing a good Albus one-shot. I hope you do well in the challenge!
EllieAuthor's Response: ahaha yes exactly :D Can you guess who the girl is, though? *wink*
Don't worry about it. My mind likes to make connection to far-fetched things, methinks. I'm pretty sure you know what sedative means, right, how when you're injected with it, you relax and everything? Well, the girl for him is his sedative. She's the one who can get him through his rough school days by simply being there for him. Like being addicted to drugs, so to speak.
Aww thank you. Y u make me blush? :P I'd love to make one, really, this is probably the only published work I'm proud of and it was such a blast to write lol (leave it to me to find writing an angsty piece fun) XD But I have no idea what to write. Fail. And about the challenge, I think the topic just disappeared off the face of the forums before it's even reached its deadline. :( So no news for me.
Ah, well. Thanks for the sweet review! (: Report Review
This story's really good.
I'm guessing the person's Al yeah? ;)
I think it's really sad how his sister gave up on him and how his brother watched it happen for so long beofr ehelping him...Author's Response: If anyone's checking the reviews to see the answer... *glances around suspiciously* then I won't tell anything! :P
Ugh yes I know! I felt so so cruel to write it that way but it just had to be done. Unfortunately, I've been through that kind of ordeal too so I knew how horrible it felt to see people you trust just sitting there, impassive, pretending it didn't happen and that everything was alright when the bullies were gone. And to have authorized figures not do anything about it either when it was done right in front of their faces was just... well. *shrugs*
Anyway, do your friends/family call you Em? Because it'd be cool since my nickname is also Em lol xD Thanks for reviewing, Emma! Report Review
This is so sad, it made me cry..Author's Response: eeep Sorry I made you cry :( Thanks for being my first reviewer though! ^_^ Report Review
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