This was such a sweet story! I've never read an Andromeda/Ted story but I decided to step out of my comfort zone and I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story.
I really liked how you outlined the differences between Andromeda and the rest of her family by her reaction to what she had just witnessed. I guess that's about the worst "Meet the parents" story in history. I guess the thing that made her sorted to Slytherin was her ambition to be with Ted.
They were so sweet and he really seems like the kind of man that would later on become the father of Nymphadora. He must really love his wife for accepting that name.
The descriptions were lovely and fitted the general atmsphere of the story and the spelling and grammar were impeccable! Good Job! Report Review
Aw, I really enjoyed reading this. I loved your description and your characterisation of Andromeda- as the other reviewer said, it felt very believable. Well done :) Report Review
this was beautifully written and the characters were wonderfully portrayed. i loved this little one-shot. everything seemed very realistic, which is definitely an extra bonus. Andromeda's family enjoying Ted's torture and her fear and confusion when Ted wanted her, and her alone really fit with their whole relationship in my eyes. this was extremely well done and i enjoyed this story very much. wonderful job on this. keep up the amazing writing and have a great day!! (:Author's Response: confusedlover,
awwwh, thank you so much! i did really try to get andy's feelings in place and i was worried that i hadn't, but you definitely reassured me. have a great day as well! :) Report Review
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