Reading Reviews for The Daughter of Lord Voldemort
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Astrid PenDragon Let the Battle Commence!

15th October 2014:
It's pretty good. It's a little fast paced though, try slowing down and giving some more detail

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Review #2, by Lily_Rose_Potter350 Let the Battle Commence!

5th June 2012:
Please do update, sorry I've got no ideas for you though! I really like this story but if I had to give you one improvement point it'd just be proof-read it as there is a few spelling mistakes, but nobody's perfect ;-) again, please do update and I hope you get some reviewers that are better than me on the ideas front :-)

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Review #3, by Brevan Let the Battle Commence!

19th March 2012:
Its awesome I loved were they turn out to be siblings

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Review #4, by Starkidgleek The Secret

19th February 2012:
you are forgiven! i have been mean to my readers and haven't updated my stories in a while... i like the big plot twist cause i thought that she was her real mom not lily i love this story and cant wait for more!

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Review #5, by Emily home, sweet home...

1st February 2012:
Omg my name is Emily too
Is that your real name? I love this
Story already!

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Review #6, by anon home, sweet home...

16th December 2011:
wheres the adventure?

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