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Reading Reviews for At the End: Final Scene

2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MarauderLover7

10th January 2012:

Haha, this was really good. I loved the way you wrote the action scenes, and loved the way you characterised Bellatrix - she was just right, I thought. This one had hardly any errors, and I laughed at Dumbledore's line at the end. :P
Keep Writing,
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am really glad that you like it!
-Fawkes

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Review #2, by Fe Forgotten

At the End

7th December 2011:

this is a gorgeous piece i love it :) very descriptive but also real at the same time. unlike some stories the dialouge followed effortlessly with the text. also unique :)

only critisim would be that its a bit confusing in the sense it feels like it needs some background to it so the reader can understand where Lily and James' relationship is at this point before the end.

otherwise well done

xx

Author's Response: Ya. Thank you. I included it in the A?N, because, as I said, I attempted to write a novel around that scene (At the End), but I am horrible at writing beginnings to stories. Thank you for the review! Only one I've got so far on this story;( .sadly!

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