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Review #1, by TheMoreSmutTheBetter Swallowing pride

17th March 2017:
I got a chuckle out of Godric saying, “Deal, my ballocks. Get me the bloody hell out of here, woman.” -- too funny.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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Review #2, by TheMoreSmutTheBetter Bad news calling

16th March 2017:
I'm enjoying the blatant ogling going on mutually between Hermione and Godric.

Love the humor too.

Well done - keep up the good work.

.-.-. errors found needing correction:
1) 'As she placed her order for a french vanilla capacino she wondered if .' ["capacino" ought to be "cappuccino"];
2) '... for a quick caffine fix to get her through the rest of her afternoon classes.' ["caffine" ought to be "caffeine"];
3) '... as she stood there starring at the man in the mirror .' ["starring" ought to be "staring"];
4) '... Godric thought to his self.' ["his self" ought to be "himself"]

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I am happy that you are enjoying the story and a huge thank you for pointing out those errors. I will be sure to get them fixed as soon as I can.

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Review #3, by TheMoreSmutTheBetter The next day

16th March 2017:
I'm glad that Harry didn't confiscate the mirror due to its involvement of the dead assassin on the campus grounds, and the mysteriousness of its capabilities.

I love it that Godric enjoys Hermione's attributes.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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Review #4, by TheMoreSmutTheBetter Pity Parties can be deadly.

16th March 2017:
Very exciting.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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Review #5, by TheMoreSmutTheBetter Luck is like that

16th March 2017:
Love the description of Godric - VERY yummy.

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Review #6, by Bre Midnight awaits

19th September 2016:
Awesome, I read the very story u based it on

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Review #7, by Brooke Midnight awaits

26th March 2015:
I feel like the story drug on and ended too fast. No closure at all:/ please finish it! Such a great story.

Author's Response: I hope to be editing it with a new eye soon. Thank you for the review.

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Review #8, by fairlawn_girl Midnight awaits

29th January 2014:
Oh wow!!! I absolutely love the story. I could not even put my phone down to stop reading!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #9, by Hope's Mom Midnight awaits

28th July 2013:
He lives and Salazar is gone. Hermione got her happy ending. Harry, Drustan and Dageus were most cunning! Thank you for finishing up this story. I have enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and for your continued reading. If it wasn't for readers like you I am not sure I would have been able to finally finish it. I am so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading.

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Review #10, by Cleopatraa Pity Parties can be deadly.

15th July 2013:
I like the way you portrayed Hermione in this story. It is really realistic in my opinion. I loved the plot twists you added and I can see your story becoming extremely interesting. It definetely lured me in. I can't wait till I read the next chapter. But I have to admit this really reminded me of a novel I've read a long time ago

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. To be truthful I got the idea from a novel I had read and wanted to see if I could blend the two together. I have added a few things here and there while taking out other things. I am just glad people are liking it.

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Review #11, by Cleopatraa Luck is like that

15th July 2013:
Wow this seemed like such an interesting concept that I really had to read it. Your summary lured me in and the fact that this is such a minor pairing which I only read once a story about (which I really loved) I knew I had to read it and luckily you did not dissapoint me. Wow he is arrogant but in a good way. I already like him.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this story. I have enjoyed writing it and it brightens my day when others enjoy it as well. Thank you for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy.

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Review #12, by Lillypad2012 One step closer

6th July 2013:
Oh please update!!! I love this story. It is quite interesting and one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I have ever read.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this story. I am working on the last chapter right now as well as some expanding editing so stay posted. Thank you again for reading and leaving this great message.

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Review #13, by Secret Santa Bad news calling

29th December 2012:
I though that there was something missing... It was Keene.

Once again I have to say I love how you described Hermione. You've captured her perfectly. And it's so like her not to jump and release the strange man from inside the mirror.

One thing I've noticed but have yet to compliment you on, is the little countdown you have at the top of every chapter ("... days until Halloween"). It gives the whole mystery a new air, I can actually feel that there is something heading our way and that the events leading up to it may be crucial.

I also love how she decided to do research and contacted McGonagall. We see so little of the Hogwarts staff in Post-Hogwarts stories.

I'll say it once more, Godric is an amazing character. I'm hanging on his every word and I cannot wait to see him out and about.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I am so very sorry that it took me so long to reply. I feel terrible for not getting online to the site in so long. Thank you for your insight and I hope to get back into writing soon.

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Review #14, by Secret Santa The next day

29th December 2012:
Hello Harry Potter!

I love how the old group is slowly starting to come into this story and crack this case. I actually feel very sorry for Hermione, she's so overworked already and this mirror/murder story isn't helping her. Oh but I do love a midday nap. That actually made me a little sleepy, right there!

I can't wait to learn more about Godric, he seems like such an interesting character you're developing and I'm very curious to see where you'll be taking this story!

Untill next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the reply. I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to respond. I am very glad you like the story and I hope to have the final chapter up soon.

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Review #15, by Secret Santa Pity Parties can be deadly.

28th December 2012:
Oh the plot thickens!

We now have dead bodies, a centuries old wizard giving Hermione instructions and a very confused Hermione. o.o

I love the way in which you depicted Hermione Granger in this story. She is such a key element to the central plot line of Harry Potter and you've captured her essence brillantly in this. It's just like her to want to continue her studies for as much as possible and attend University just because she can. In my opinion, you've really highlighted her curiosity and booksmart.

The action scenes were very well written, I felt my heart quicken with the suspense and the emotion of it. Those paragraphs were fast paced and alert and fitted in perfectly with the whole story.

As for Godric, I really like his accent. I couldn't bring myself to write anything in Founder Era or about the Founders, because I'm sure I would miss something crucial like accent or beliefs that were common to the UK in that time and age!

Keep up the good work and I'll see you next chapter!

Author's Response: I really like reading novels set in the medieval times and during the time I see the founders having lived. I am so glad that you enjoyed this chapter and I wanted to thank you so much for the review.

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Review #16, by Secret Santa Luck is like that

26th December 2012:
Ho Ho Ho! Merry Christmas!

This was a beautiful first chapter! You've set the tone for what I think will be an amazing journey. The description of Godric was perfect in my opinion, it's just as I always pictured him.

The plot is also very interesting, the idea that the founders are at odds with each other after all this time and that even Riddle himself was a pawn in this conflict is something I find really original and I'm excited to see where you go with it.

The writting is very good, it flows nicely, your grammar and spelling are flawless.

I can't wait to read more of this! See you next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel terrible that it had taken me so long to respond to my reviews. I greatly appreciate your insight. If it wasn't for my readers and their reviews I would have been completely lost.

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Review #17, by bluefishes312 One step closer

12th December 2012:
I keep checking back to see what happens but no luck in an update yet :-( love this story! Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you the review and the continued support of my story. I am sorry that the last update is taking so long, but I hope to have it up by the first of the year. Thank you again.

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Review #18, by Trix One step closer

13th November 2012:
So exciting!!! Nice that you finally had the time to make this :) I like it but I have a little problem understanding the old language because I am from sweden, but I love it:)

Author's Response: I am glad that even with the little problem understanding some of the old language you have still enjoyed this chapter. The huge ending should be up by the first of the year. Thank you for all your support.

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Review #19, by Noturavggurl Slytherin Challenge

31st October 2012:
I like Hermione/Oc stories, and this one is great! Please
keep writing, and post soon! Also enjoying the plot, it's so

Author's Response: Thank you. The goal is to have the newest chapter up soon. So hopefully the wait wont be too much longer.

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Review #20, by Trix Slytherin Challenge

4th October 2012:
Please update soon I want to know what happens next :) You can't quit now when it's just the end left, I have followed this story for sometime and I have to know the end. You are really good at writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for being such a loyal follower of this story. I am sorry that I have not updated recently but real life has been kicking my butt. The goal is to have the next chapter into the queue soon, so your wait shouldn't be too much longer. Thank you again for reading.

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Review #21, by annmarie Slytherin Challenge

23rd September 2012:
I love it its one of the best stories i've read and can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope to have the last two chapters up soon. Real Life has been a pain.

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Review #22, by Arwinurban Slytherin Challenge

16th September 2012:
Dageus lied. What is the truth? What did he find? Please update!!

Author's Response: You will just have to continue reading in order to find out. Thank you so much for taking the effort to leave me a review. Hope to have more chapters up soon.

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Review #23, by Arwinurban Hallway Confessions

21st August 2012:
This is really good! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support. The next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon.

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Review #24, by Hope's Mom Hallway Confessions

19th August 2012:
Their time together is so bittersweet. Godric's words(that you gave him) were beautiful - they would melt any woman's heart. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Your very welcome and thank you so much for all your words of encouragement.

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Review #25, by Stephanie Hallway Confessions

18th August 2012:
I LOVE this story! I feel horrible for Hermione and Godric. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this story so much. It is by far my favorite story that I have written so far. The next few chapters should be coming soon. Thank you.

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