Hi! Well, I am glad that his had been written, and I am sorry that it couldn't be an official entry of the rewrite a HP scene challenge because of queue issues, but thank you for taking the time to write this!
Well I must say, I am a Harry/Ginny fan, and I never really liked Harry and Cho being together, but this was really quite good! I actually couldn't believe that Harry would cheat on Ginny with Cho, it's quite strange in a way, I always knew that Harry and Ginny would end up together. But aside that, the language you used was good, I couldn't see any grammar/spelling mistakes and the characters were beautifully portrayed.
I am sorry that this couldn't count as an official entry, because I really liked this! Love Livvy xAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review; sorry it took me so long to reply to it, though. I never really liked Harry/Cho either, but as soon as I ended up with it in your challenge, this popped right into my brain and I fell in love with it. And you don't have to be sorry that it wasn't an official entry, because I genuinely enter challenges for the fun of it and because they always give me some inspiration; I can't recall ever being too determined to actually win one. I'm always much excited about publishing a story that I'M really proud of than I am to see what others think of it. Report Review
Wow. Please continue this story.Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! This was only meant to be a oneshot, but I've gotten three reviews on this chapter so far, and all of them say 'continue it'. Right now, I have a few other things I want to work on, but I might come back to it someday. Wheteher or not that happens, thanks for reading and reviewing; I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
I freaking love your story. You need to continue it or make a new storyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This is meant to be a oneshot, since I have other things I want to work on first, but I could come back to it one day I suppose... Report Review
awesome! I loved it! Make more! Make more!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm happy you liked it! Report Review
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