I like the plot a lot. Other than a few typos, it was perfectly fine grammatically. The only thing I didn't like was one line "Izzy isn't one of those girls who dress trashy or anything but her clothes compare to those of a prostitute." It is just a complete contradiction and doesn't make sense. But it really isn't all that important, it just irked me. I would have like to see more detail. How did Rose feel? Overall, I really like this story. I love the ending line :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didnt know what was going through my head when i typed that one line... lol Report Review
I Loved This! :) It was really sweet and cute... and isn't Scorp to die for?! I got slightly confused as to why Rose followed Scorpius, if she hated him but I Soon forgot all about it :D Your writing style is really good though! Don't stop Writing, It's addictive Author's Response: Rose just followed simply for curiosity and maybe she had a tiny crush and hating him was just a cover up? aha Report Review
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