kind of annoying how often people portray cheating and betrayal as this beautiful thing.
hermione basically thinks/feels she needs harry and not ron because he betrayed her by leaving her. so she does the same thing to him in return?
oh but it's okay. ron can forgive. and hermione can get over her 'can't sleep alone thing' as soon as she doesn't need an excuse to sleep with harry. actually harry's a bit weird too. he's such a minor presence despite being the 2nd most important character. and what we see of him doesn't make sense or match up with the books in the slightest.
idk. i guess i prefer harmony when it's realistic. and their love would always cost them ron, if not all of the weasleys as well. and when you feel the character's shame and sadness at doing something they know is wrong rather than just 'hearing' about how it bothers them but keep doing it anyway.
it's also laughable that the cheater who isn't mature enough to stop herself from having sex to have the decency to break up with her boyfriend first spends most of the chapter calling ron the immature one compared to herself and harry. i mean, c'mon. Report Review
Lovely short story - very harmonious...Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
This was beautifully written. Great job!Author's Response: :D Thank you! Report Review
Great, it really is a compliment to the Harmony relationship.Author's Response: Thank you. :) I appreciate it. Report Review
Awesome! I liked it very much.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) Report Review
No way Ron is ever okay with be betrayed like that.
No one is, its not realistic.Author's Response: I'm sorry you think so, but thanks for telling me! Report Review
This is the best writing I think I've ever read on this site! This is so amazing, and the word 'aw!' was ringing through my head the entire story. You really capture the essence of that relationship! This fic really is great :DAuthor's Response: Oh, my goodness, thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so, that means so much to me. Report Review
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