Oh I quite liked this chapter! I thought you did a great job bringing Sam's character from Glee into the world of Harry Potter. Also I liked the idea behind the story as well, him trying to help Harry get support to fight back to Voldemort, and at the same time falling in love with Cho who happened to be his best friend's girlfriend while he was still alive. I really hope you continue this story as I think its very original and would be a great read! I thought the description and flow throughout the chapter were absolutely wonderful as well. also I like how you are telling this story as well with his pov and such! Great Job!
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This is a really good start off to the story! I like how you've slotted Sam into the canon, a masterstroke that you've put him in Hufflepuff and friends with Cedric. It all seems so neat and accurate, so kudos on that :) I definetely got his image and character in this- Sam isn't very distinctive in the first place, so well done on making him stand out.
I like your descriptions too and the characters you've introduced in Hufflepuff. Great job!Author's Response: That was the one thing that concerned me about writing Sam. Not much was ever mentioned about it, despite being in every episode of the second season, save one. I'm looking forward to when Sam returns...it will give me a better idea of how to continue writing him.
The decision to put Sam in Hufflepuff was an easy one. There was no other house that seemed even remotely appropriate for Sam. Report Review
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