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Review #1, by LoonyTheElf How I love you.

31st December 2011:
Wow. This was really deep! I loved it! Wish it were longer, though. Happy holidays!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have actually thought about re-writing it and lengthening it at some point...

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Review #2, by Nicky How I love you.

6th December 2011:
I loved this i thought it was very well writen.

Author's Response: thank you :)

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Review #3, by Kim How I love you.

27th November 2011:
It's a shame, that this is just a one-shot.
It is very beautiful, very touching! I really enjoy your writing, all the feelings you put into it; amazing!
It feels like as if it has come right out of your heart, and this is why I really like it!

Greetings from Germany

Author's Response: thank you, i do plan to one day turn it into a longer story, but thats a while off i'm afraid... :)

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Review #4, by MaryJane99 How I love you.

27th November 2011:
This is one of the best Sirius/OC's I have ever read! This is truly brilliant. I like how Juniper wasn't one of those 'gossipy, typical girls'. It's also cool that you made Sirius likeable, yet having his flaws too. (Though I imagine his arrogance got him into some amount of trouble)

I don't have much to point out on- that is, what you should work on but I do wish you would have described why exactly he didn't recognize Juniper at first? I mean in the Order meeting. He only really looked at Juniper when she said her name.

Keep writing!
-Dee

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

I think I generally feel that the latter third of the story is a bit too rushed, and would love to go back and rewrite it a bit. It will take a while before I'll get round to it, but I'll take your suggestion into consideration.

Preferably I think I'd actually like to develop this oneshot into a novella, but we'll see :)


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