I like this beginning, it is full of possibilities! Imagine that there is a story for every single item found in the R.O.R! The chapters you can create are endless. Enchanted items, possessed items, haunted cabinets, potions, etc. I look forward to what comes next. Report Review
Whoah super creepy dead Crabb action! Sweet :)Author's Response: I tried to make it as realistic as possible. Thanks for reading!
This is such an original, great plot line! And it even touches on a serious issue (ie the aftermath of a war).
Now i've written this, I'm going to turn the page and find out what awaited behind the door!Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Tell everyone that you know! Report Review
I really like it so far!! The characters seem really approachable and...real (strange as it may sound). Looking forward to reading more soon!!
Also, the cliffhanger is VERY intriguing...Author's Response: I always try to make my characters realistic. Thank you so much for reading! ;) Report Review
Hi. I liked your story. I didn't review because I was waiting for more. Plus I only just learned how to go to give reviews. I hope you continue it. I look everyday for updates.
PattyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It's going very slow because I have a lot of things on my plate, but I think I can get the next chapter out soon. Report Review
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