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ahhh that was SO good! you're an amazing writer and i was really cativated throughout the whole chapter. I thought you had Ginny and Hermionie in character very well and pace of the story just seemed to flow all the way through it. I'm also very intriuged as to where the plot is going to go in future chapters, so look forward to some more reviews and once again, great job!

Author's Response: Yay for the review tag!

I'm glad you liked it :) I'm always worried about characterisation because i've never been overly good at it. Hopefully, the next chapter should be up soon - I just need to put my challenge stories into the que :)
*jaz

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Aw such a pretty picture! P.S.- What happens next?! I hafta know!!! X@

Author's Response: haha, I guess you'll find out when the next chapter comes up :) x

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very lovely.

great start to a story! i really enjoyed this first chapter. it will be interesting to see how things got to where they are now and how they progress. very nice job. keep up the amazing writing and update soon please!! (:

Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you like it, the next chapter should be up soon x

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Update! This is so cool!

Author's Response: Thanks :) i'm editing the first chapter at the moment so chapter two may take a while :) x
*Jaz

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Very nice start
Interesting to see how Ron and Harry are not in the picture any more

Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah, Ron isn't in at the moment, Harry comes in later
*Jaz

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