Shay,Shay,Shay. This is pretty cute. Some feedback, Everything is centered and that makes it difficult to read. Also this program makes it easy to put apge breaks. Check it out.
Tata!
Rilee

Author's Response: Thank you fot the tip.I was still getting used to the program at the time, but I'll go in and change that. I'l try to put in an apage break, but it may take some messing around.

Thanks for reviewing!
-Shay

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Hello! I know this is my story, but no one gas reviewed it yet so I figured if I did it would start a trend! Please read, rate and reveiw! I know this isn't as good as it could be. The third chapter is being validated and that is the last chapter to go up. I'm leaving the story open ended so I can add more later in a sequal or just leave it and let you think of what happens next. I'm also stoping because I have another story that I like better right now. Drop a comment and let me know what you think!
-Shay

Author's Response: I will respond to reviews as quickly as possible so don't be afraid to drop a line. I don't bite :D

I will also take ideas and grammer corections. (For example, I probably misspelled something in this review response.) I know 50 reads isn't a lot, but if that many people left a review, I might give you a sneek peek at my new, better story!

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