EPIC can they go to hogwarts soon? Report Review
Over all I like the flow and the plotline that this story is following. I loved the bit where Draco was walking among the Pansies and was thinking of Pansy, a nice touch.
And can you really count Pansy as his girlfriend? I've always seen her as more of a clinger on for the prestige than someone to commit to a relationship.
I do think you could be a bit more descriptive with some of the feelings that people like Draco is feeling. Such as the worry about meeting the dark lord and becoming a death eater and also about the task of killing Dumbledore. 9/10 and plz update soon. Adding to favs so I know when you update.Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm trying to update as fast as I can because I already have a few more chapters written I just need a chance to get on this site more often. Thank you for adding it to your favorites! I'm flattered!! Report Review
I wonder if that was a put up job by Dracos mother to have Allium visit Draco in his room. Another nice chapter. But Pansy's second name is Parkinson not Perkinson. 8/10 and moving on.Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! I appreciate your imput and I am aware of this typo and will be sure to fix it as soon as i am able. Thanks again!! :) Report Review
In a way when I first saw him worried in the film I had wondered why Draco was worried. That was until he revealed that he had to kill Dumbledore.
It's good to read a view of what happened before what happened with Voldemort and the others. 8/10 and moving on.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and reading! I really appreciate it! Report Review
An interesting start to your story. An insight into what happened after the battle at the ministry. 8/10 and moving on.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I greatly appreciate it! Report Review
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