Hey I just read both chapters, and I liked it a lot! The kids are funny and the Slytherin issue is really thought provoking. I can't wait to see where you go with this. There is only one problem; it's that there is so much space between paragraphs that I constantly have to scroll. I don't know if this is an issue with HPFF or what, but if it isn't, you may want to consider just putting one space or even none at all--just going to the next indent.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story. I am working on the spacing issue and hope to have it fixed for the third episode. It is a clash between my word processor's auto-format and HPFF. I'll go back and fix the first 2 episodes when I've worked out the problem. I hope you keep reading and enjoy the rest of the season. Report Review
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