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Review #1, by RosieQueen The power of love

26th November 2011:
Where is Albus? Harry had three children, didnt you know? and the death eaters would have all been captured by by nine years after the war, wouldnt they? and the story is a bit hard to understand. Not trying to be mean, just helping you write better.

Author's Response: I know he had three children and James was the oldest anyway - not Lily but its not meant to follow the epilogue - does that make it not cannon, I get confused. It probably is a little hard to understand- i was in a rush to write it as it was past midnight and I had school the next day, Hope this helped and thanks for reading!!

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Review #2, by Lys The power of love

22nd November 2011:
Love it! So cute :D Keep writing!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing :)

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