This chapter was slightly confusing at times, but still pretty good! You have a great plot line that could go on forever. It really is goodAuthor's Response: I like keeping people guessing. I just hope its not too confusing. Report Review
Wow! This is really good! I really didnt expect that! And Harry with Hermione's parents?!? Haha you are a great writer!Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Great story so far, especially with the original concept! Nice to see Slimbridge get her comeuppance but I'm surprised she wasn't already in Azkaban for persecuting muggles! Really enjoying the story and I look forward to future installments! :)Author's Response: Thanks, it's finished for now. If I add anymore I'll probably make it a different story. I hadn't marked it complete yet because I was waiting for it to validate. Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
A curious twist on the final conflict. I like the fact that the Ministry is trying to proclaim Harry dead to get his money. It makes things more interesting.Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think greed always throws an interesting twist into things.
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