I don't have a very high opinion of prologues simply because they tend to be a bit boring, but I can't wait for the rest of your story. It sounds very interesting. There wasn't a whole lot of characterization in this chapter, so I'm also looking forward to that. This could be a really cool story. 8/10!Author's Response: AW!! Thank you very much! I agree but I needed to start the story this way. Next chapter is where it all starts. I'll try to get it up after 5th of January. Plus, thanks for calling it a prologue even though I made a mistake! Report Review
Not a bad beginning. You describe alot of powerful feelings. I look forward to reading more, so 9/10 and plz update soon. By the way, you might want to change your chapter title. Epilogue is the end of a story. I think you meant prologue which is at the beginning. *MERRY CHRISTMAS*Author's Response: AW! Thank you so, so much!!! I promise the next one is better!! =))) Oops!! I meant that only! Gosh, studies are meddling with my brain. Report Review
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