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Review #1, by hplover987 Unrequited love

30th November 2011:
Hi, first of all thank you for entering!
I really liked this, it wasn't long but you really got the message of the song across. You could really relate the lyrics of the song with the characters actions. How James felt crushed and humiliated from Lily practically torturing him. James was perfect, I thought him declaring his love was nice but it went a little over the top when he kept repeating himself. I loved Lily as week, you can tell this could of easily been the turning point in the Lily James situation. I think you did really well.
Good job :D

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