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Review #1, by BlameItOnTheNargles  Breaking Down

25th March 2012:
That was so sad and emotional D: I so wasn't expecting Al to do that at the end, I guess he seemed really harsh with smirking at it and laughing, I could get him getting angry and breaking stuff and then just having a break down but smirking and laughing? I so wasn't expecting that!!!
Anyway you wrote with so much emotion and it was just beautiful in a messed up sad way haha ;D
I love getting a bit more of a back story on Amanda, I would love to find out more about them but happy memories they shared!! :D
Anyway it was great, update it again soon!


Author's Response: I'm so sorry this took me so long to respond and took me so long to even put out the chapter!! Everything's been pretty hectic lately with school and family... but anyways I digress!
I'm happy that it wasn't what you expected because i wanted this story to be something different, not predictable i guess. I never saw Al to be doing that either, but then i started writing and it just came out. I'm glad you liked it even with it's messed-upedness, even though that's not a word. I'm thinking one last chapter, which will definitely wrap up all loose ties in the story, and i think you'll be happy with the ending, i'm going for a lighter tone. But depending on how much i end up writing, i may break it into two parts, so definitely check for an upcoming chapter sometime soon! I'm going to work much harder to make it a less wait but on this chapter i had major writers block! But not to fear, the rest is planned out!
thank you so much, you always have the most wonderful reviews!
RavenclawWayToBe :)

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Review #2, by BlameItOnTheNargles  What Lays Within

28th January 2012:
I have a chapter dedicated to me! I feel so special! I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before! Thank you so much for putting that in the chapter, it means so much to me! =D
I am so glad I inspired you to write more to the story as I love it. My heart breaks for Albus. I feel so sorry for him!
I can't wait to see what the memory is...I bet it makes me cry!
I love your story so far and it is so touching. It must so difficult to loose your best friend as its like there the closest person to you even though your not related to them.
Update again soon! =D


Author's Response: Aha, it was no problem! I feel for Albus aswell and I am having a hard time trying to finish up the story for it is an emotional end and I am trying to get it just right. And as for the memory, you hold me to such high standards that i can only hope i deliver! I'm sorry it took me so long to respond as i have been going through some tough exams at school, so it may be a bit longer before the chapter is finally done, but I assure you i am working very hard!
Thank you for the wonderful review!

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Review #3, by Anon. What Lays Within

22nd January 2012:
This was beautiful and incredibly emotional, well done!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I think there will be either one or two more chapters! Your review means alot to me, as i tried to showcase many emotions, so thank you!

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Review #4, by madeofwishes Seeing Is Deceiving, Dreaming Is Believing

10th January 2012:
This is such a moving story. The death of a friend is an amazingly hard thing to write about, but you have managed to do so without making it sound trite. Great work. You have a way with words!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you sooo much! It means alot to me! I was going through a really emotional time when I wrote this and i appreciate your great review! Thank you so much for that because sometimes i feel like i don't know what I'm doing and how people will respond! The next chapter is in validation and should be posted within the next few days!
Thank you once again for the great review,

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Review #5, by BlameItOnTheNargles  Seeing Is Deceiving, Dreaming Is Believing

18th December 2011:
WHATS THE MEMORY SHE LEFT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!
I really wanted him to go see it! This is such a sad one-shot. It was written great but I think you left stuff out like what she was dying off and was it the same as her brother? Did she and Albus have a relationship or not? But anyway you did a great job considering you put it all into a one-shot! :D Write another one so I find out what was in the memory? =D


Author's Response: Okay, well firstly, thanks for the awesome review. It was hard to write this because i was really confused on the best way to fit all of it in there, so i appreciate that you think i did a good job of fitting it all in. Secondly, over Christmas i am thinking about editting the one-shot to clarify any missing information, and i am also thinking about making it a short story so i can add in the memory and any other things that she may have wanted to tell Al. The memory is already written and saved to my computer, so i think i will write another. I wasn't going to but your review just gave me the extra push i needed. Thank you so much for the amazing and enthusiastic review!!! :D


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