O.o I definitely am enjoying this! Don't Stop! And don't worry my stories don't get many reviews either. :) Report Review
This is a unique story line. I enjoyes reading this! Report Review
Can you please finish this story!!!Author's Response: I have just added a new chapter hope you like Report Review
Ah! Holey cheese balls! LOL this has got to be the best story I have read so far please update soon cuz I really wanna know where their relationship goes and how Harry will react.:DAuthor's Response: i am glad that you like the story, I just added a new chapter hope you like Report Review
I love this story u should keep it going this is very interesting Report Review
wait dont stop the story! i love it!Author's Response: I am in the process of re-editing the second chapter - this site does not allow student-teacher relationships so I need to redo the next chapter. Report Review
Aw, I'm sorry you didn't get a bunch of reviews. It may just be that the age difference is off putting to a lot of people. I was a bit weirded out at first as well.
I did like it a lot. It seemed a bit rushed at times, but Lily's character was really believable. I could just picture her as the impulsive and passionate graduate. Draco was also well written and I enjoyed reading it.
My only suggestion would be slow it down a bit. Lengthen the chapters, add more dialogue and conflict between the parents. It could do wonders for the story.
But I did love reading it. It's refreshing to read something that hasn't been done a million times before. I hope you have better luck with reviews on your other stories. :)Author's Response: Thank you very much. My next one is about Hermione and Marcus Flint. I will take you suggestions into account.!! Thanks!! :) Report Review
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