Reading Reviews for One Potter Girl & One Malfoy
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AphroditePeacock Paperwork & quiet time

17th April 2013:
O.o I definitely am enjoying this! Don't Stop! And don't worry my stories don't get many reviews either. :)

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Review #2, by AphroditePeacock The Witch's Brew

17th April 2013:
This is a unique story line. I enjoyes reading this!

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Review #3, by atalaya12 finding out

2nd March 2013:
Can you please finish this story!!!

Author's Response: I have just added a new chapter hope you like

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Review #4, by Lovely Jane finding out

26th February 2013:
Ah! Holey cheese balls! LOL this has got to be the best story I have read so far please update soon cuz I really wanna know where their relationship goes and how Harry will react.:D

Author's Response: i am glad that you like the story, I just added a new chapter hope you like

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Review #5, by Atalaya12 finding out

30th July 2012:
I love this story u should keep it going this is very interesting

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Review #6, by james girl finding out

26th December 2011:
wait dont stop the story! i love it!

Author's Response: I am in the process of re-editing the second chapter - this site does not allow student-teacher relationships so I need to redo the next chapter.

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Review #7, by luvinpadfoot finding out

18th December 2011:
Aw, I'm sorry you didn't get a bunch of reviews. It may just be that the age difference is off putting to a lot of people. I was a bit weirded out at first as well.

I did like it a lot. It seemed a bit rushed at times, but Lily's character was really believable. I could just picture her as the impulsive and passionate graduate. Draco was also well written and I enjoyed reading it.

My only suggestion would be slow it down a bit. Lengthen the chapters, add more dialogue and conflict between the parents. It could do wonders for the story.

But I did love reading it. It's refreshing to read something that hasn't been done a million times before. I hope you have better luck with reviews on your other stories. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. My next one is about Hermione and Marcus Flint. I will take you suggestions into account.!! Thanks!! :)

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