Ew. I hate Ron. xppp

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Keep this going, it's good.

However one thing is spoiling it for me and that is your continued use of the phrase 'of coarse' when you mean 'of course'. Please try to avoid this common error.

Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: sorry! i'll fix those! thanks for reviewing :)

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Another good chapter. A couple of errors though.

First of all it's 'of course' and not 'of coarse' and she wouldn't 'loose him' she would 'lose him.'

Otherwise, well done! Keep it up.

Author's Response: oh, sorry! I'm not a great speller :P i'll go back and fix those! thanks for reviewing :)

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I like it! I'm dying to know how they got together. Perhaps you could have done a little more with the making love scene, but that's a matter for you alone, stay within your comfort level.

A good start!

Author's Response: thanks! i think i'm going to write a short story about how they fell in love when I'm finished this story, not for a while, but eventually you will find out! thanks for reviewing :)

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This is great spo far, write more!

Author's Response: thank you! sorry, i usually take a while to update :/ thanks for reviewing!

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I like this story so far, can't wait for more..

Author's Response: i'll try and post more as soon as I can! thanks for reviewing :)

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Heyhey,

I like this story, so plz update soon.
About the pregnancy symptoms, it's different for everyone, so don't worry about getting them wrong. The only thing you missed is the being very tired, this is one that happens to most women.

I'd say keep up the good work!

Author's Response: hey! thanks, i'll make sure I add that one! thanks for reviewing :)

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love the story! and i like the hermione pregnant thing and that draco is happy w/ it.

Author's Response: thank you! :) thanks for reviewing!

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Please continue writing. I love this story! I wanna know what happens! I love Draco in this story!

Author's Response: thank you!! i'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can! thanks for reviewing :)

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I so hope it's a little girl. Maybe her name could be Christa Nicole? That's what i'm naming my daughter someday. It's pronounced like Chris - ta. It would be a beautiful/perfect name for a beautiful/perfect couple.

Author's Response: Thats a pretty name! I really don't know what they're gonna name him or her yet, we got a long ways to go! I'll take that into consideration! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Its amazing!!! Just... you might need to work a teensy weensy bit on chappie length if you want more reads! Other than that, its absolutely FABULOUS!

Author's Response: thank you! il try my best to lengthen the chapters, it'll just take a while longer to update! thanks for reviewing :)

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omg this is great!! is hermione pregnant?!?!???

Author's Response: thank you! and i dont know, you'll have to wait and see! :) thanks for reviewing!

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Love the whole thing so far hope you write more :)

Author's Response: thanks so much! more will be on its way soon :) thanks for reviewing!

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awesome stories! 10/10 i think u should have like a winter ball or a hogwarts dance happen :)

LUV UR STORIES SOO MUCH! MAKE A NEW CHAPTER SOON!

Author's Response: thank you so much!! good idea, i probably will have a dance of some sort! and i put the next chapter up for validation a few days ago so i expect it to be validated either today or tomorrow :) thanks for reviewing!

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I hope that you continue with this soon it, would be cool to see if you decide to make Hermione pregnant, because though it has been done I think it would add something to this story. However this is your story and you can go wherever you like with it.

Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw!! we'll see where it goes, i do like the idea though so you'll just have to wait and see! :)

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I wanna know more! :-3

Author's Response: working on the next chapter! thanks for the reveiw :)

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I love this story. I went like "oh." at the end of it so this will proved how much I love the lines. Not too cliché. Somehow I always like this pairing. The pairing that Rowling did was way too obvious. I find that at the end the ending was too predictable. It lost all the enxcitement and suspense. Bravo for your effort. I love your story. Continue please!

Author's Response: thank you! im glad you like it :)
I'm working on the next chapter, it will be up as soon as it can! thanks for the reveiw!

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I demand more.
NOW.
I swear I will have a tantrum if you do not continue this story.
D:
oh yeah, amazing story by the way.

Author's Response: omg!! you are the best! :) im in the middle of writing the next chapter, and the backlog is only 3 days so im hoping to finish it today or tomorrow before it gets more backed up! thanks for the amazing review!

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This was the best story I've ever read! Please write more...I think you could have stretched out the "make love" part more

Author's Response: thanks so much!!! that means a lot :) next chapters up for validation! thanks for reviewing!

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You really should write more!!! It was really good!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! it really boosts my confidence that people actually want me to write more!! it might take a while but i will! :) thanks for reviewing!

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Wonderful and honest. So unlike the other stories where they're both emo or suicidal or something, I really see realistic versions of their characters! Keep writing!

Author's Response: oh, thank you so much!! thats great to hear that its fairly realistic! thanks for the review :)

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Spewed I really loved it keep Going with it

Author's Response: glad you liked it!! thanks for the review :)

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Very well done for a first attempt. You spelt quidditch wrong. Also your love scene was done far too quickly, felt a little rushed. With a little cleaning up, this story has a lot of potential, I look forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw! i wasn't planning on another chapter because i didn't feel very confident about this, but maybe i will now that people actually like it :)

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I loved it!! I wish it had a longer story of how they fell in love...but Wow...great story.

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! sorry it wasn't longer, i've just never written anything before so I'm not very good at it! but maybe i'll try and re-write it longer!

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