IT'S AMAZING! :) YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER!!! IT'S CUTE. Report Review
I think you could have made this a bit longer. I mean, who were they running away from? And why they were running, that sort of thing. Though I must admit you do have a knack for the mystery side of things. 9/10.Author's Response: Ah, well, I'm rather terrible with detail, unfortunately. I will try to improve next time! Thank you for the feedback! Report Review
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