{reviewid: 2743446, reviewer: 'sally'}
1st October 2012:
you could have seperated a few certain phrases , but all in all .. good job.
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{reviewid: 2668913, reviewer: 'ryann'}
6th March 2012:
moremoremloremoremoremoremoremore!!!
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{reviewid: 2637474, reviewer: 'Michelle'}
2nd January 2012:
Please write more I want to see Lilly kick voldemorts arse sorry but I love the way that sounds
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{reviewid: 2636523, reviewer: 'Unkown'}
30th December 2011:
Love it! Please please write soon! Can i make a suggestion? Can you make the next chapter longer? That would make it sooo much better! thanks!
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{reviewid: 2635311, reviewer: 'homerHarris'}
28th December 2011:
I like this story but what is it doing in the harry & Ginny section
Author's Response: later on in the story Harry & Ginny get together
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{reviewid: 2632811, reviewer: 'HG%26RHr'}
23rd December 2011:
Can't wait for more!
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{reviewid: 2632057, reviewer: 'Unkown'}
21st December 2011:
Love your story, it's the best i've read so far! Please post soon! I'm dying to read the next chapters!
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{reviewid: 2631815, reviewer: 'BethanyRose'}
21st December 2011:
Hiya! I really like your story idea and I am looking forward to the. Next chapter of it. However I find that the way you come out of the story and put things in brackets interrupts the flow off the writing so you should maybe try to add it in in the story. This is just my opinion though :/ anyway continue writing as I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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{reviewid: 2623001, reviewer: 'JM'}
30th November 2011:
Keep writing its good!
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{reviewid: 2622766, reviewer: 'rebecca'}
30th November 2011:
not bad if only u could continue
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{reviewid: 2622609, reviewer: 'The_seeker12'}
29th November 2011:
I love this idea! It's so brilliant. Please tell me Draco gets to be nice. I hate it when he's cruel, and I think he and Harry could get along perfectly as "cousins".
Harry is great. I mean, he's creepy Harry, but he's still Harry, which is incredibly awesome. (I don't know if that made any sense to you. It barely made any sense to me, actually.)
This is a great story. I can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: don't worry i get cha. thanks for the idea
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{reviewid: 2622519, reviewer: 'Christina'}
29th November 2011:
This look good. Can not wait to read more
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{reviewid: 2619605, reviewer: 'Kaydee-Anne'}
23rd November 2011:
Awesome story so far, very good storyline :D x
Author's Response: aww thanks. i really enjoy writing this story.
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