I just have to ask did she die a gryffindors death???Author's Response: Ellie did die a Gryffindor's death, if that's what you are asking. :) Thank you so much for reading/reviewing! Ellie Report Review
ALSO, you should totally do a Lily/Teddy story!! I know they're 10 years apart, but it could work! They're amazing together. Besides, that's not even that big of an age difference. IT WOULD BE SO BEAUTIFUL! *crying*Author's Response: I've been thinking of Lily/Teddy a lot, but I honestly like Ted/Vic. Something about the way I see them just seems to click. :) Thank you so much for the review! Ellie Report Review
OHH!! Now I remember what it was!! Wasn't Ron supposed to have died?!?!?!!!? Wasn't that how Rose and Charlie became friends in the first place?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!! Because Rose's dad, Ron died and Charlie was there to comfort her?? Get your facts straight woman!!! (story)Author's Response: Erm ... yeah. Ron was supposed to die, but I forgot that minor detail. Oops. Thanks for reminding me. :) Ellie Report Review
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE THIS!!! I refuse to believe it. Lavender would never do something like that! And especially not to her own daughter!! NO! I also can't believe James is allergic to Skelegrow. :)Author's Response: I'm sorry? I'm pretty sure I wore it, but yeah. :) I know it's twisted, but that's what makes it interesting, yeah? And, ah, James's rotten luck. Thank you for the review. Ellie Report Review
That's the most heartbreaking thing ever!! THIS is the most heartbreaking thing ever!!Author's Response: Believe me, I was trying not to cry when I wrote this. Listen to the song 'forever and always' by Parachute when you read the chapter- that was almost too much. I'm glad it's bringing out emotions, though, in that sadistic writer way of mine. Thank you so much for the review! Ellie Report Review
I say James and Charlie!!Author's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and see what happens ... :) Thank you so much for the review! Ellie Report Review
I loved this story. Mostly because of how James was. I have a ADHD brother so I know how they can be. Absolutely amazing.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it. My best friend/maybe boyfriend is ADHD. :) Thank you so much for the review! Ellie Report Review
kk so this #100! I can honestly this has been one of the most amzing fanfics like EVERRR:D im following all ur other stories too, so update soon!!! kk byee:)Author's Response: You are AMAZING. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you're reading my stuff. It means the world to me. Thank you so much for the 100th review!!! Ellie Report Review
hi:)) i finished the story (amazing btw:D) but i wanted to add the last two reviews to get ur story to a hundred:) soo #99! YAYAYAuthor's Response: You are awesome. :) I'm glad you like it, and thank you so much for helping me get to 100!!! :D Thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
ELLIEE :)) (same chica from before haha)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review! :D Ellie Report Review
TEDDY:) yes i know the story's already over, but ur like 4 reviews away from a hundred and i loved ur authors note so i thought might as well, you know? haha ur amazing:))Author's Response: Feel free to review whenever you want. :D I actually kind of hoped more people would review when it was finished ... I'm really glad you like it, and thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
Wow I read the whole book in one day and I must say I was well impressed! It made me smile, cry, laugh and get frustrated! I thoroughly enjoyed it and would advice you to continue writing. Great story idea I found the plot really interesting although was real annoyed with the fact that I shed tears for James when he wasn't dead :') But other than that I loved the book XDAuthor's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the review! :) I'm so glad you liked it. It is a bit of a roller coaster; I have the habit of writing jokes even when things look pretty rough. When James died, you wouldn't believe how much the readers revolted. My original plan was for him to die, and then for Charlie to end up with Al, but they were seriously planning a mutiny. If you want to see more of my writing . go read Remember the Slytherins. It's a bit darker, but I'm really proud of where it's going. :) Thanks, and I'm so glad you like it! Ellie Report Review
Hello! Okay, this story was cute, but why was the healer evil?? That doesn't make sense to me... Other than that, good job! I really enjoyed it. KEEP WRITING :D Shay_GryffAuthor's Response: The healer was evil because he was just crazy. He fantasized about being the next Dark Lord, and tried to do so via an elaborate scheme. (possessed Rhys, poisoned Charlie, kidnapped children, etc). I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
in my opinion the lot of them are bonkers, but then again i don,t know what its like to be crazy or have a family that's crazy.Author's Response: Well, yes, they are slightly crazy. But they're also teenagers. I know that my friends and me say and discuss random and crazy things, but that could just be us. I admit that I'm a little bonkers, and my family is crazy in a not so good way, so I have no idea how to explain it to you. Thanks for the review, though! Ellie Report Review
Err... I'm sort of confused as to why the Potters are acting so mean about his disorder. Albus in particular.Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! The Potters aren't being mean, really, they're just teasing him, like families do. It's kind of a joke, but sometimes it goes a little too far. My best friend has really severe ADHD, and he makes fun of it himself a lot. Does that explain it? Ellie Report Review
I cried. I will miss this story so much! James and Charlie were SO cute! As were all the other couples and I think the graduation was a lot better than all the other ones I've read. Congratulations on completing this story, I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it . and I'm glad I managed to make them cute, compared to killing each other, as in the first chapter. And . I really can't believe I completed it. Thanks for reading, and for the review! Ellie Report Review
Really good! Question though, wasn't Ron suppose to be dead?? Just confusedAuthor's Response: Oops ... my bad. Sorry, I completely blanked out on my own canon for a moment there. I'll fix it. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like it! Ellie Report Review
Taco... You know, maybe the guy you like likes you but is afraid that you don't like him, so is trying to push it away out of fear of making you uncomfortable and pushing you away... But that's just me overanalyzing things. What would i know- I go to an all girls school. I want to hate you for killing James... but I just can't bring myself to it.Author's Response: I'm let you in on a secret: we slow-danced a few nights ago at the last dance, and we might get together soon. :) So I guess somethings do work out. Actually, we slow danced right before I posted the epilogue. So ... it was kind of ironic. And ... don't count James out yet. ;) Some things may surprise you. Trust me ... Thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
I love James, but I want to strangle him for being such an idiot.Author's Response: Oh, don't we all. Sometimes the idiot needs a bit of sense smacked into him. Thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
No! Yeah i already knew about him taking the potion, but its still sad.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
Teddy. Poor james, hope he feels better.Author's Response: Yeah ... James has it a bit rough right now. :) Thanks for the review! Ellie Report Review
Ellie, (cause im lazy like that :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking it so far. :) Ellie Report Review
It was a bumpy ride well worth it. To be blunt, had anyone told me to go and read a novel length fanfic written by a 13 year old girl, I would have laughed in their face! (And thanks for the reference! I fully expected Ron to be chasing Scorpius around firing at him!) I look forward to reading more of your works, if you decide to continue on here or somewhere else online. Perhaps in some years, we'll see you with a real book in Kindle format or some such as your skills undoubtedly improve. For something that started off as a project to get the fluffy cliches out of the way, you certainly turned it into something worthwhile and engrossing. All the best!Author's Response: To be blunt, I love it when people are blunt. :) (It's probably because I have such issues sugarcoating things ...) Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Believe me, if someone told me the same thing I probably would laugh, too. (which is sad as I just wrote one ...) And don't worry; I have many plans to continue with fanfiction. I might start some original work, but RTS is still going strong, and there's a new one that'll be up and done by the end of summer. :) I'm really glad you liked it, but I'm honestly still not happy with it. And I PROMISE to get back on reading. I'm really sorry about that. :/ So, really, just thanks for reading and reviewing. They made my day. :) Ellie Report Review
This chapter was a perfect ending! and I never knew you were only 13! In which case you are very talented so keep writing because undoubtedly we will keep reading. Good Luck :)Author's Response: Technically I'll be fourteen in week. :) Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it. I really didn't want to say it earlier, because it tends to dissuade some people ... and I promise to keep writing. There's a new chapter of RTS in the queue right now. :) Thank you so much! Ellie Report Review
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