I've got a feeling that something is definately going to be wrong with the house, I can't wait to find out what it is.
That's spooky that Ted thought that he had seen something in the window, I wonder if something is going to happen to him or Victoire whilst they're fixing the place up?
I can't wait to read more, if you're going to continue this story? I'm alread scared for them :D Did you win the challenge? Report Review
Ooh I really really like this story!
It's very mysterious and intriguing, I really want to read on and see who actually was in the house and what Teddy was actually seeing!
Results for the competition will be up soon!Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :) Report Review
Ooh, I like this! It's got a great beginning. Just enough to keep someone interested.
The Teddy/Victoire pairing was great, they fit nicely together. I would've liked maybe a little more interaction between the two, and maybe meet Ryan, but that's okay. (I have a feeling that will come in later.)
I like Teddy a lot too. He's a great character.
Lovely story. :)Author's Response: This is just a prologue. More will come.
Thank you. :) Report Review
Excited for more! Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
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