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Review #1, by AlwaysSev The Prophecy

15th February 2012:
So exciting! Your story has so many interesting twists and turns and so many things that I am thinking about and excited for. I hope there is a new update soon :)

Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying the story so much! I'll make sure I update as soon as I can. Meanwhile, keep thinking... :)

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Review #2, by AlwaysSev Love Stories

15th February 2012:
You broke my heart! Reading that proposal was so sad! Poor Cleo! I have fallen in love with Alex, even though he is dead which is amazing that you can do that. And I think it is super interesting that Cleo might have inherited some of her grandmothers talent -- possibly. I like that you put that in there. Sometimes it can be sort of cheesy, but I don't think so here! I really want to read more :)

Author's Response: Thanks! There will deffo be some more up soon :)
I'm so glad you like Alex, that will make it so much better to read later on when Remus comes in...
Thanks again!


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Review #3, by AlwaysSev Goodbye

14th February 2012:
So sad! You do such a good job of writing emotions! I am so impressed! I like the mystery that you set up around his death, and didn't go into very much detail. I like that, because I am left wondering what really happened! Your characters are really strongly written, and one thing I want to see more of is the relationship between Cleo and Remus. It seems like they are really close, but I am wondering of they were always really good friends, or if they were brought together by Alex. To me, it seems like their friendship is somewhat new, but I may be wrong! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!
There will lots more of Cleo and Remus and even some more Alex...
Glad your enjoying it and will have some more up as soon as I can :)


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Review #4, by AlwaysSev A Night To Remember

14th February 2012:
I love this story! Something that you did really well was that you made me so attached to Alex before his accident. I read so many stories where a character dies in the first chapter, but I can't really relate to the emotion because I don't know there character. However, when I read this chapter I was already attached to Alex and I felt my stomach kind of sink when I read the last part :( but I really want to read more! Just one suggestion, there are some grammatical errors, and I just wanted to let you know so you could read over it again, or have someone read over it. But I think it is great and I can't wait to continue reading!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story!
I really wanted everyone to like Alex before his death, so it's great you found yourself getting attached :)
Thanks for Reading!


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Review #5, by Elphias_xmas_socks A Night To Remember

22nd November 2011:
Ah, love it :) as usual, absolutely amazing...
Only thing is at the start you seemed to finish quite a few paras with !s and some sounds a bit wierd to me, but that's probs just me. :)

10/10!!

Elphias_xmas_sock xxx

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeh, when I look at it, it does have quite a few !'s, I think I'll just leave it though!
Thanks for leaving 2 of the same reviews as well! xxx


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Review #6, by Elphias_xmas_socks A Night To Remember

22nd November 2011:
Ah, love it :) as usual, absolutely amazing...
Only thing is at the start you seemed to finish quite a few paras with !s and some sounds a bit wierd to me, but that's probs just me. :)

10/10!!

Elphias_xmas_sock xxx

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Review #7, by naflower05 A Night To Remember

3rd November 2011:
good story so far! i can't wait to see what happens next, update again soon! =]

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it, will have more up soon!

Thanks for reading! x


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