5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LittleLionGirl Meeting people=No fun

2nd July 2012:
I love your plot line and where it's going.. your trio seems to be an interesting bunch.. I'm just curious are Tessa and Julia like Shade or are they diffrent with similar powers?

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Review #2, by LittleLionGirl Julia loves Bert's

2nd July 2012:
This still is a great story and I cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a terrible person for not being on as often as I should be. Almost a year.

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Review #3, by LittleLionGirl Meeting my group

2nd July 2012:
This is a good story so far and I figured you deserve a review.. :) one tiny bit of CC check your story sum. I think you meant Who not how

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I haven't been on in forever, so you'll have to forgive me. I'll proofread it a bit more next time.

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Review #4, by starryskies55 Julia loves Bert's

11th February 2012:
Your writing style is quite funny, and your ideas are original, but your characters aren't really leaping out of the screen yet- I think you should perhaps focus on their personalities as well as their superficial likes and dislikes and their abilities- and also, you haven't explained the other two girls much.
Great story though. Keep it up! :)

Author's Response: I will eventually explain them, like switch POV's soon, probably the next chapter, or maybe go back and edit the 2nd and 3rd to include them. Every few chapter's I'll switch midway or so. Thanks for reading, and for the review!

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Review #5, by starryskies55 Prologue

11th February 2012:
Very interesting first chapter... yay I get to go to Chapter two!
Just quick CC- tried is spelt with an i not a y, and in your story summary, it should be 'vengance', not 'avengance'.
It's one of those weird words that changes :)
-starryskies55 :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I guess i don't really use spell check sometimes. Thanks for readind!

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