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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by xxlilgurlxx Eclipse

28th November 2004:
omg..i nearly cried..well, just a few tears..lol..great story!..but it was extremely sad..i dunno why but it sorta left me hanging..hmmp..oh well, good job!!

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Review #2, by Deadly_sins_Snape Eclipse

22nd April 2004:
Well, its a bit weird, i didnt get it at all until the end. needs a little work on construction of sentences though, and the grammers a little iffy, but its generallly a nice story.

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Review #3, by Deadly_sins_Snape Eclipse

22nd April 2004:
Well, its a bit weird, i didnt get it at all until the end. needs a little work on construction of sentences though, and the grammers a little iffy, but its generallly a nice story.

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