Hey, I liked it, cute and fluffy... little bit random. I like the end too!Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! :) Report Review
Scorpius was certainly an exuberant character in this story! I could definitely tell how frantic and worked up he was, trying to make a perfect night. Too bad the poor fellow didn't think things through a little more carefully or at least give a practice run or something.
One complaint I have is that I found all the exclamation points to be a little off-putting. I felt they were overused. Everything was in a perpetual state of excitement . . . and well, that was kind of the point of the story, but it just seemed a bit much.
The most amusing part of the story for me was when Scorpius Floo'd Mrs. Weasley to ask about spells to heal cuts! It was so funny how she was wary, and he took pains to assure her it was just a minor cut, and then he was trying to decide if the spell had worked or not.
Also, I can't believe Rose brought her dad with her! Talk about poor timing! Poor Scorpius. Just about everything that could go wrong went wrong, didn't it?Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm going to sort out all those exclamation marks!
This is so good! It made me laugh, and than laugh harder. Scorpius's POV in this was just amazing, and the way you wrote his characterization was both funny and unpredictable. I thoroughly enjoyed this, IT DOES NOT SUCK, don't let anybody tell you it does. I loved it. I'm glad you chose to do my challenge, and the way you used the words was unique and not what I expected, and I loved it! Great Job!
DRACOLOVERGIRL5000Author's Response: Thanks! I really wasn't expecting that! You've really cheered me up! :)
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