Once again, the moments you picked are perfect. The Dumbledore bit was brilliant.
I love how you show that side of Augusta, I've never seen her like that.
Oh, and I'd defintely want to read more ;) Report Review
Poor Augusta! To watch her husband get murdered, and to think it's not the last tragedy that will strike her.
It's also the first story I've read about the war Grindelwald waged on Europe. and I'm really impressed with it. There's a whole new era, although I can see why it's so difficult to write.
Good writing :) Report Review
Augusta is only ever mentioned as Neville's Gran, but I love the way you manage to show what she could have been like as a student. I can see her as you painted her, it seems fitting.
Great start! Report Review
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