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Review #1, by slytherinchica08 Hogsmeade

7th May 2012:
Oh that joke was absolutely awesome! It really made me giggle out loud so I'm really glad that you included it in this oneshot! I thought you did a great job with this pairing as not many people really write it which is rather sad as it was canon! I loved your description throughout the chapter from her giggling friends to the old lady reading a book. The new slug candy thing was a pretty cool idea too! I thought the moment between them at the end where they both finally say i love you was rather cute and was super happy when they ended up exchanging a kiss! Really I thought this piece was good though it would have been nice to see more description because in the places you did put description was really wonderful! Great Job!


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Review #2, by Dumbledore_82 Hogsmeade

2nd January 2012:
Very nice story! I would like to read more of them.

Author's Response: Really? I'll try to another one, perhaps in the same alternate universe. No one does non-angsty Harry and Cho, do they? Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by Lexi_Black Hogsmeade

22nd November 2011:
Good story, one note, Harry's hair is jet black, like James' other than that it's good. I especially liked the Snape jokes.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I love how you took the time to do it the review, it makes me feel all fuzzy inside. And thank you for the hair thing, I'll fix that.

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Review #4, by Logamind Hogsmeade

11th November 2011:
Hi there!

Thanks for entering the challange. This was a lovely little one shot to read. Especially since I never usually read Harry/Cho. I really liked the idea that they never broke up after all that happened in fifth year and kept growing strong.

Also I love the idea that Cho still wants to go to Madam Puddifoots. She really does love that place doesn't she :P

Lovely little story, glad you could enter it!


Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun to write.

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