I like the idea behind your story. But you should really put more effort into it. The spelling is horrendous. (I don't mind a couple of errors, but there are a couple in every sentence). I'm sure if you read through it a couple of times after writing it, it would be better to read.
Anyway, I like the idea of Rose going to that school and that she lost touch with her family and friends from back home. I wonder what's going to happen next. Report Review
This chapter was great but too short!! But then I may just be greedy :) hope you update quick x Report Review
Great beginning but I would look Into having someone proof read for you as it really will make a difference to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your a quick updater! Report Review
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