I like the connection back to the title of the story at the end, and I feel so sorry for Sirius! You have a great command of English and the story flows very nicely. Well done! Report Review
This is a great start to the story, I can't wait to see what happens next! I feel so sorry for Sirius! You've portrayed him really well, emotionally different from the happy-go-lucky Sirius we're used to which is an interesting twist. I hope it all works out for him now! Well done. Report Review
this is really sad. you totally should have made this longer its such a juicy storyline. can't wait for an update and good luck with the challenge! Report Review
This was great - besides a few typing errors, but we all get those! :) tres interessant. I love a sirius/lily story Report Review
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