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Review #1, by Happy Hedwig The Truth that Broke Me

13th December 2011:
I like the connection back to the title of the story at the end, and I feel so sorry for Sirius! You have a great command of English and the story flows very nicely. Well done!

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Review #2, by Happy Hedwig Wishing For Lies

13th December 2011:
This is a great start to the story, I can't wait to see what happens next! I feel so sorry for Sirius! You've portrayed him really well, emotionally different from the happy-go-lucky Sirius we're used to which is an interesting twist. I hope it all works out for him now! Well done.

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Review #3, by rj_sunshine The Truth that Broke Me

5th December 2011:
this is really sad. you totally should have made this longer its such a juicy storyline. can't wait for an update and good luck with the challenge!

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Review #4, by rj_sunshine Wishing For Lies

5th December 2011:
This was great - besides a few typing errors, but we all get those! :)
tres interessant. I love a sirius/lily story

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