realy great can't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Sorry but that's all I wrote. I don't really have plans for what to write in the next section. I have had a request or two for that so I might later. Report Review
Great prank with serious intentions there. I'm looking forward to red the article.keep up with your good work. L love this chapter.Author's Response: I haven't got the article yet. I'm not sure if I'll get to that or not. I keep going back and reading the story but it just hasn't popped yet. If I think of it I'll add it to the story. Thanks for the review. Report Review
This is good but too glossed over. It may not seem that way when you write it but the details and the words you chose didn't have enough depth and meaning. Just what I thought Although the story is one of the best I've seen so far. Really really great plot and true to the facts.Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate that honest and useful critique. I know I am no writer by any stretch of the imagination. I do wish I could provide better detail. I only hope that as I write more and get useful critiques I will get better. Report Review
i really like your stories for they are always optimistic.this another great one. Keep up.
P.S-don't you think you ended what might have been suddenly.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm having a little trouble with the site but the next chapter should post soon.
Thanks for the note on What Might have been. I thought it was wrapped up nicely myself. But that may just be me. Report Review
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