Oh, wow! This is a great piece, it really is! I think you have the characterisation's spot on, especially the part with Ron - "He breathed a sigh of relief; at least she hadn’t changed her mind about her feelings for him recently." I could totally imagine him thinking that! The emotion in this is great and you really feel happy for them, I'm adding to my favourites because (as I said before) this is a great piece! :)Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it! Thanks for the review! ~cb ") Report Review
haha, so the idea was really waiting to be "dawn" upon, rather than "drawn" :P ok, so besides my pathetic joke this was lovely :) I love that Ron was sweet, and still nervous so it didn't make all his planning seem OOC at all. Really, if you're going to propose to Hermione, it makes sense to have it so planned out lol, it's exactly how she'd want it :) really great job, the imagery was there, making it all real, and lovely.Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I appreciated your joke, haha. I really should learn to actually read over my author's note... *sighs* I'm too lazy. Thanks for the lovely review fellow Gryffie! ~cb ") Report Review
I love it. It's my favoriteAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! ~cb ") Report Review
That was beautiful! So lovely! Lol, "How do you know I didn't make it?" Beautiful and so romantic! 10/10!Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I really love Ron/Hermione :) Report Review
really sweet, nice writing, and i love how romantic ron is! very cute! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~cb Report Review
We belong together...Hermione. :) I LOVE this song! I LOVE this one-shot! Keep up the good work! :) :)Author's Response: Awww thanks so much! I love that song, too! ~cb Report Review
Aw this was cute! By the end of it, I had the most goofiest grin on my face and my family were looking at me like I was crazy.. But, that's okay. It was all worth it because this was fantastic :)Author's Response: Well thanks so much! :D I always have goofy grins on my face whenever I read anything Ron-Hermione, haha ~cb Report Review
I love the beautiful scene. I am a major fan of sunrises, so you can imagine how I felt about this story. If some dude went through all this trouble to propose to me, I'd say yes too!Author's Response: Thanks so much. And if someone went through any trouble to propose to me, I'd definitely say yes too, haha ~cb Report Review
It was a great story :) And the song really went with it!Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's one of my favourite songs :) ~cb Report Review
Aw, this was so cute! I love Ronmione, their my favourite ship! Please write more on them! :) xxxAuthor's Response: Thank so much ") They're my favourite HP couple as well. And if inspiration strikes me, I might just write more Report Review
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